First Draft for Cosmo By Sital

 Improvements that need to be made:

• Get pictures
• Add colour
• Work on second double page spread

Updates for Print Production on Empire By Sital

Progress Report and Action Plan Kevin Greedary

On Monday we finished off filming all our scenes, reshooting may be required for a couple of shots but shouldn't be much of a problem.

Our main focus for now up until the deadline is to complete fully the editing for the trailer.

Video Progress Report and Action Plan By Sital

Empire Magazine By Sital

First Draft

Improvements that need to be made:

• The font: "The title and the writing in general 
• The word Empire needed to stand out
• Spelling
• Colour

Second Draft

Improvements that need to be made:

• The font and the size of font
• Spacing for paragraphs
• The caption under the picture. Shouldn't cover her.

Second Draft 

Improvements that need to be made:

• Re shoot the picture-Too much red(Clothing)
• The words shouldn't have - all on same line

18/03/11 to 24/03/11 Progress Report and Actiong Plan By Sital

Friday 18th March
Due to complcations I had to do quite a lot of filming by myself. So we went to sanjay's house. We filmed the ending killing scenes which I would say was a productive day, however looking over some of the footage we will need to re shoot.

Over the week we have been coming in and editing. We really need to get craking as we only have 11days to have a complete product.
Also we've been working on our print productions which have been going quite well. 

For the following ten days we have left we have hoping to finishs filming on the monday coming up and spend morning, breaks, lunches and after school time editing.
I will be puttin up a plan for the next ten days but thats all for now.

This weeks timeable By Tanveer, Kevin and Sital

Date	Time	Actors/Characters	Location	Props/Costume	Shot/Plot
Wed 15th	After School 4:00	·         Anita o   Daljeeta ·         Ray o   Mohammed	·         Mohammed’s house ·         o   Bedroom	·         Fake Blood ·         Demonic symbol	Possessed Scene
Fri 16th	After School 4:00	·         Bad boy gang o   Sonu o   Nic o   Vishal o   Tanveer ·         Anita o   Daljeeta	·         Sanjays house	·         A LOT of fake blood	Ending scenes

Progress Report - Tanveer, Kevin, Sital & Sonam

This week we plan to film on wednesday and friday in order to try and finish our production work, then we will be editing all the scenes produced in order to come up with a final production.

Wednesday - Reshooting scenes at Rayman's house

Friday - Shooting new scenes and finishing filming

Progress Report- By Tanveer, Kevin, Sital, Sonam

Last week the group started editing. Tanveer Kevin and Sital spent thursday afternoon till 5 oclock editing, we editited the background music, classroom scene.  On Friday periods five and six Sital and Sonam edited the contact scene and made a first draft of our title sequences. 

Attacking Scene!

This is one of the scenes where Daljitta aka Anita turns mental and attacks the guys. This was shot today! :)

This scene came out totally wrong, it was funny; just to show how much fun we have while shooting! ☺

Extra Filming Clips By Sital

This was a classroom scene we re shot.

Another scene of our protagonist getting bullied and picked on

Updated Schedule foe week 07/03/11 By Sital

Date	Time	Actors/Characters	Location	Props/Costume	Shot/Plot
Wed 9th	After School 4.30	·         Bad Boys o   Sonu o   Nick o   Vishal ·         Anita o   Daljeeta	Drama Studio	·         Fake Blood ·         Glass window	Bloody hand scene Dragging on the floor scene
Thurs10th	Periods 3 and 4 10.50 till 12.30	·         Anita o   Daljeeta ·         Ray o   Mohammed	Mohammed’s house o   Bedroom	·         Fake Blood ·         Demonic symbol	Possessed Scene
Fri 11th	Periods 5 and 6	·         Bad boy o   Sital ·         Anita o   Daljeeta	Drama Studio	·         Fake blood	Bedroom Scene. Ending Scene

Test Screening Feedback Form:

Average Media Language Grade: B

Average Conventions Grade: B

Average Creativity Grade: C

Average Attention to Detail Grade: C

Average Technical Proficiency Grade: C

Overall Positive Comments:

Cinematography - Good acting scenes. Good use of the pan. The actors are good. Variety of shots and techniques.

Mise-en-scene - Represents the 'OUTSIDER'.  Ripped clothing. School atmosphere. Used setting very well. Variety of locations. Bed scenes.

Lighting - Variety of lighting. Lighting was clear. Successful high key lighting. Can see the characters well, they are not overshadowed. Natural. Bright lighting lit up the scene.

Sound - Clear sound. Sound was clear to understand.

Conventions - Successful demonic eyes.

 
Overall Criticisms:

Cinematography - Slower panning. Steady it. Camera work was jittery. Focus on small things.

Mise-en-scene - Clothing should be better. Props are not visible when they are throwing it at the protagonist. Emphasise the ripped clothing.

Lighting -  Lighting of the bed scene. Be careful of reflections. Very dark, needs light. Too much reflections. Less brightness.

Sound - Couldn't hear the sounds in the shots due to a problem on the computer. More clear. We could not hear any sound. More dramatic sounds.

Conventions - Bullying related to horror? More thriller scenes.

In my opinion this feedback was pointless as nobody could write a proper sentence with feedback that we haven't already heard! -_-