Empire Magazine By Sital

First Draft

Improvements that need to be made:

• The font: "The title and the writing in general 
• The word Empire needed to stand out
• Spelling
• Colour

Second Draft

Improvements that need to be made:

• The font and the size of font
• Spacing for paragraphs
• The caption under the picture. Shouldn't cover her.

Second Draft 

Improvements that need to be made:

• Re shoot the picture-Too much red(Clothing)
• The words shouldn't have - all on same line