Average Media Language Grade: B
Average Conventions Grade: B
Average Creativity Grade: C
Average Attention to Detail Grade: C
Average Technical Proficiency Grade: C
Overall Positive Comments:
Cinematography - Good acting scenes. Good use of the pan. The actors are good. Variety of shots and techniques.
Mise-en-scene - Represents the 'OUTSIDER'. Ripped clothing. School atmosphere. Used setting very well. Variety of locations. Bed scenes.
Lighting - Variety of lighting. Lighting was clear. Successful high key lighting. Can see the characters well, they are not overshadowed. Natural. Bright lighting lit up the scene.
Sound - Clear sound. Sound was clear to understand.
Conventions - Successful demonic eyes.
Overall Criticisms:
Cinematography - Slower panning. Steady it. Camera work was jittery. Focus on small things.
Mise-en-scene - Clothing should be better. Props are not visible when they are throwing it at the protagonist. Emphasise the ripped clothing.
Lighting - Lighting of the bed scene. Be careful of reflections. Very dark, needs light. Too much reflections. Less brightness.
Sound - Couldn't hear the sounds in the shots due to a problem on the computer. More clear. We could not hear any sound. More dramatic sounds.
Conventions - Bullying related to horror? More thriller scenes.
In my opinion this feedback was pointless as nobody could write a proper sentence with feedback that we haven't already heard! -_-
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